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Punishing The Pet by VoreCreator

:icondrat123:
Honestly, I've liked your stuff for awhile, particularly the Jabba/Slave stuff. But following you through your multiple accounts I've only seen marginal improvements and you seem to take less and less chances. Most of your work is the same background with a naked girl in the foreground. It just doesn't seem like a lot of effort is put into these with the same pic being produced over and over. Really the images you have merged don't really mesh and I'd like to see things interacting more. Besides that the shop is at least descent. The lighting and some of the cutting could be improved but they seem okay. Jabba doesn't exactly fit on his throne, something that with a little more time could have been easily been fixed. I've seen pretty orignial fakes in your gallery before and I hope to see them again soon. This just isn't among your best.
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VoreCreator Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for this critique. I have looked over my picture again and noticed that you are right. I failed to change and add some stuff that I had meant to, so I went back and fixed that. Hopefully it is to your liking now. :)
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drat123 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Yea I noticed a few of the changes. But that really wasn't the main point of my critique. The main point was to give the suggestion that you might be in something of a rut artistically. Nothing wrong with that, in fact I've been there many times before. The nude slave girl in foreground with Jabba in the background is just getting somewhat stale. Try something new or challenge yourself, like having Jabba or other characters interact with the girls in the pic. I know it can be done because I've seen you and other fakers on the site do it before. I also understand you not wanting to post my critique because it was somewhat on the negative side, but I want to know that it was my honest opinion of what I saw in your work. Hopefully this clears things up.
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VoreCreator Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah well, I think this actually turned out to be one of my better pics. I know I've been having a lot of pics with a nude girl in the foreground, but some of them are test pics that I liked and decided to post here, and others are for friends who wanted me to put them in Jabba's palace.

BTW I normally would have posted your critique, but since this was for a friend I thought I'd hold it back.
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